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Hi, I enjoyed reading your opinion on standardized testing. I like how you stayed firm in your opinion and didn't come off to the reader as wishy washy about your opinion. Well done!! You don't need to work on much, but if evidence is used, the source should be sited. For the most part I agree with your opinion and enjoyed reading your commentary piece.
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